tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post3755267420957099445..comments2023-08-20T19:19:05.121+05:30Comments on Shadowy Dreams: CinderellaChhayahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-84207107950584362222010-05-04T15:26:35.508+05:302010-05-04T15:26:35.508+05:30succintly put up......succintly put up......Mr Happyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14828286817927399030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-11034088509201908892009-08-15T20:49:56.093+05:302009-08-15T20:49:56.093+05:30@VPrabhu - its slightly more complicated than that...@VPrabhu - its slightly more complicated than that :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-70087173442732077202009-08-15T16:19:47.532+05:302009-08-15T16:19:47.532+05:30These lines come clearly from the soul. Telltale s...These lines come clearly from the soul. Telltale signs of it all the way. It's dark and agonizing, a feeling of never being able to continue with life peacefully. The lines suggest that you have been torn apart by many incidents in life, all of them painful. I see that you have tried hard to attain something, but the final destination has eluded you somehow, all the times.itsyvitsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11163127814904396350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-86697308855183693152009-06-26T13:51:44.371+05:302009-06-26T13:51:44.371+05:30@Brosreview -
Guilty as charged :)
this is incom...@Brosreview - <br />Guilty as charged :)<br /><br />this is incomplete and unpolished.. i never cud express it the way i wanted to..<br /><br />and yeah.. please feel free to comment .. i dont feel offended when i read a constructive criticism :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-50150170252943132542009-06-26T13:15:52.479+05:302009-06-26T13:15:52.479+05:30Hmm, as I began to read this one, I got this insta...Hmm, as I began to read this one, I got this instant feeling as if this was your draft. <br /><br />You see, the lines seem disconnected. the feelings are there, but, it is not conveyed strong enough to aid your readers to feel the same. I mean, sure, I can feel you if I probe deeper. But, I don't think that should be needed for poems such as this one. <br /><br />I like it! I think, you Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-37127862339554373842009-01-20T14:29:00.000+05:302009-01-20T14:29:00.000+05:30So 2009 hasnt seen any new poems from you....waiti...So 2009 hasnt seen any new poems from you....waiting....L. Venkata Subramaniamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08013877791567403788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-77047197288080773072009-01-12T15:03:00.000+05:302009-01-12T15:03:00.000+05:30wow this poem is flowing like river.. You too me t...wow this poem is flowing like river.. You too me to different world of Cinderella.. Awesome poem...Its my lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03942455187960760364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-4015288276355665322009-01-09T12:12:00.000+05:302009-01-09T12:12:00.000+05:30Very nicely scripted Poem...Am just awestruck, thi...Very nicely scripted Poem...<BR/>Am just awestruck, thinking about this!!! <BR/>Wonderful!! Absolutely Wonderful!!!<BR/><BR/>Wishing you a very happy and prosperous New Year!!!!<BR/><BR/>Waiting eagerly for the next poem in queue...<BR/>:-)Whats In A Namehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16691498990750958564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-8927890413835766212009-01-08T20:35:00.000+05:302009-01-08T20:35:00.000+05:30wud u consider ads on ur blog? If it might be as b...wud u consider ads on ur blog? If it might be as big as ur clustrmap?!?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-56780769731442454932009-01-07T02:03:00.000+05:302009-01-07T02:03:00.000+05:30i dont know if this is the right way but, i want t...i dont know if this is the right way but, i want to add you to my blog roll. can u plz add mine to your list? IGNORE this if you aren't interested!<BR/><BR/>AND this is a request. you are a creative person, can u plz review my blog. whether it is OK or NOT!! Real thanks. HAPPY NEW YEArAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-31050336107178248752009-01-03T19:52:00.000+05:302009-01-03T19:52:00.000+05:30Thanks for shareing a beautiful poem. As usual, th...Thanks for shareing a beautiful poem. As usual, this poem also has that mistique hidden message for the reader. Best regards.Zerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09826329590603287472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-65578751351569656852009-01-01T20:39:00.000+05:302009-01-01T20:39:00.000+05:30@ Shea - :Dgood ol love. lol... the tyrant@ Shea - :D<BR/>good ol love. lol... the tyrantChhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-82775458721997396422009-01-01T00:34:00.000+05:302009-01-01T00:34:00.000+05:30Chhaya this is very good poem, i like it so much. ...Chhaya this is very good poem, i like it so much. Congratulations<BR/><BR/>Keep writting :)<BR/><BR/>I'll use it on my blog http://smoothcoffeeandwarmthcandles.blogspot.com<BR/><BR/>Hope you don't mindOutsiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12492644084524468549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-53699039395887111192008-12-30T07:56:00.000+05:302008-12-30T07:56:00.000+05:30it is about heart ache and pain... and loss of lov...it is about heart ache and pain... and loss of love... an ending... i like the allusion to the cinderella story u used - its creative... good job~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-37490116537288165602008-12-30T04:39:00.000+05:302008-12-30T04:39:00.000+05:30ya true...but see on the brighter side. Cindrella ...ya true...but see on the brighter side. Cindrella wud hav been a happier soul...doesnt that matter???Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03413684095571795490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-3772880343862066262008-12-29T08:14:00.000+05:302008-12-29T08:14:00.000+05:30@Pilgrim...lol... that wud kill the poem.@Pilgrim...<BR/><BR/>lol... that wud kill the poem.Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-25622364290568047242008-12-28T22:42:00.000+05:302008-12-28T22:42:00.000+05:30u r, as usual,...."The Best"...i donno wat to say,...u r, as usual,...."The Best"...i donno wat to say, guess u know wat i wud say...The Cindrella is meant to be. But may be The Prince aint for her...<BR/>tc..<BR/><BR/>The Pilgrim...Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03413684095571795490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-4718964399445391532008-12-28T16:45:00.000+05:302008-12-28T16:45:00.000+05:30@Venkie - LOL... happy poem?? :Dmay be, one day.. ...@Venkie - <BR/>LOL... happy poem?? :D<BR/>may be, one day.. i need to feel something to be able to write it. "happiness" is elusive. <BR/>will try for sure, cz i love challenges.. the resulting poem may lack the soul though :)<BR/>and yeah, thank u for that praise. reminded me of someone v specialChhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-85417846135433120172008-12-28T13:59:00.000+05:302008-12-28T13:59:00.000+05:30now you are a wordsmith!the breeze that made me sh...now you are a wordsmith!<BR/><BR/>the breeze that made me shiver<BR/>or was it the fear in my heart?<BR/><BR/>I am fighting you - for you<BR/><BR/>too much, you really do have a way with words.<BR/><BR/>You should write some happy poems also you know.L. Venkata Subramaniamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08013877791567403788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-11043722814909341902008-12-28T10:11:00.000+05:302008-12-28T10:11:00.000+05:30@ Maya....i know what you mean by "incomplete".. i...@ Maya....<BR/>i know what you mean by "incomplete".. i feel the same. i wrote this poem in 10 minutes flat which is not a good sign. but the title is exactly what i am trying to express... its Cinderella that was never "meant to be". An unfulfilled dream. a fairytale that cheats, a love that brings you out in open, makes you vulnerable.<BR/><BR/>i was wondering, what wud have happened if the Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-72676587006466763082008-12-28T09:52:00.000+05:302008-12-28T09:52:00.000+05:30@Quackster... thank u :)when i write a poem, its m...@Quackster...<BR/> <BR/>thank u :)<BR/>when i write a poem, its mostly like a conversation i have with my soul... so they may get confusing for my readers.. i m glad that it made sense to u :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-76631504536585936082008-12-27T23:27:00.000+05:302008-12-27T23:27:00.000+05:30The poem is definitely an alternative view of the ...The poem is definitely an alternative view of the "clock strikes midnight" used as metaphor for the point of break in a relationship. The idea is definitely good, though it took me a few readings to get the idea. However, once I got it, the unique was made that much better so I'm not sure if you need to rewrite or not.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07774058959178034129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-90884216170819369762008-12-27T22:47:00.000+05:302008-12-27T22:47:00.000+05:30@Rachna..there was a time when i wanted to be publ...@Rachna..<BR/><BR/>there was a time when i wanted to be published, then i wrote a full-length novel, and was paid for it. it wasnt aplesant exp. almost killed the souls of my characters. <BR/>so i better stay here. :)<BR/>thnx for liking the poem. i often promise, but never touch my poems.. lol... somehow, they feel sacred to me. the part of my heart that still beats.Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-2942787673528557542008-12-27T18:15:00.000+05:302008-12-27T18:15:00.000+05:30I am glad you smiled :)Why do I always feel that y...I am glad you smiled :)<BR/><BR/>Why do I always feel that your poems do not require any polishing? I just love them the way they are anyways, that's my opinion. I am just curious, have you ever considered getting them published?Rachanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01046400235118156847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-18313455101251139182008-12-27T11:51:00.000+05:302008-12-27T11:51:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.com