tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post4704546884149280620..comments2023-08-20T19:19:05.121+05:30Comments on Shadowy Dreams: ScreamChhayahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-28371399557013521262009-07-28T07:38:46.653+05:302009-07-28T07:38:46.653+05:30@ Deep da- perhaps it was (the fact that i dont se...@ Deep da- perhaps it was (the fact that i dont see it as a poem) bcz i wrote it like prose.. and then broke it in the form of a poem. I named it scream bcz the primary emotion behind the poem was that of anger.. mixed with sorrow... a kind of desperation, to be heard...<br /><br />about me picking sorrow as my muse.. i guess its because i have never shared it with people in the real life.. its Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-1940010228424091002009-07-27T22:46:49.844+05:302009-07-27T22:46:49.844+05:30I read Scream several times and wondered why you d...I read Scream several times and wondered why you don't call it a poem. In fact I didn't know a clear definition of a "poem". <br /><br />It is depressing like many of your other work. I have often wondered why you have chosen "sorrow" as your subject matter in general. On the other hand, as far as this composition goes, I think there is also a desperation in the screamD.Dasguptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01174281317593366887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-84498006155051026612009-06-26T13:50:20.501+05:302009-06-26T13:50:20.501+05:30@Brosreview -
am i that transparent??? lol .. i g...@Brosreview -<br /><br />am i that transparent??? lol .. i guess i was, in this poem.<br /><br />My name means "Shadow" :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-53258935411397477972009-06-26T13:10:58.028+05:302009-06-26T13:10:58.028+05:30The reason you do not see this as a poem is mainly...The reason you do not see this as a poem is mainly because you've expressed yourself here, perhaps. <br /><br />You simply let your feelings flow out here via words. Apparently, that is a secret formula to some good poetry. That should answer your dilemma.<br /><br />Now, I like this post. It is appropriate in expressing your internal expressions. I like it because its rawness, its simplicityOpaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-29557944677556609922009-03-30T01:05:00.000+05:302009-03-30T01:05:00.000+05:30Nice blog. Keep up the good work. Hey, by the way,...Nice blog. Keep up the good work. Hey, by the way, do you mind taking a look at our new website www.indianewsupdates.com. It has various interesting sections. Who knows, it might just have the right kind of stuff that you are looking for.<BR/><BR/>Also, if you like this website, can you please recommend it to your friends. Your little help would help us in a big way.<BR/><BR/>Thank you,<BR/><BR/>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-11565149703581238612009-03-23T09:20:00.000+05:302009-03-23T09:20:00.000+05:30Hey Chhaya, I never knew that you are such a good ...Hey Chhaya, I never knew that you are such a good poet. Great work really. From now on I am going to closely follow your blog for sure.<BR/><BR/>:-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-59039619173486046072009-03-20T18:25:00.000+05:302009-03-20T18:25:00.000+05:30hi cindy nice poem............take carehi cindy nice poem............take carerevolutionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14264006299570706303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-90307283170034871812009-03-20T18:23:00.000+05:302009-03-20T18:23:00.000+05:30hi cindy nice poem............take carehi cindy nice poem............take carerevolutionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14264006299570706303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-84003281474292418252009-02-26T22:57:00.000+05:302009-02-26T22:57:00.000+05:30why didnt i read it earlier?? maybe i wasnt suppos...why didnt i read it earlier?? maybe i wasnt supposed to....comment on it??<BR/>u know wat i wud say...illusions are not always surreal, nor are they real in a sense...Chhaya, u do justice to the pain..but, does it happen vice versa??<BR/>regards,<BR/>a pilgrim...Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03413684095571795490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-68860316322415253452009-02-26T22:56:00.000+05:302009-02-26T22:56:00.000+05:30why didnt i read it earlier?? maybe i wasnt suppos...why didnt i read it earlier?? maybe i wasnt supposed to....comment on it??<BR/>u know wat i wud say...illusions are not always surreal, nor are they real in a sense...Chhaya, u do justice to the pain..but, does it happen vice versa??<BR/>regards,<BR/>a pilgrim...Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03413684095571795490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-48415484769744166102009-02-25T18:46:00.000+05:302009-02-25T18:46:00.000+05:30Hey Chhaya, you seemed to have disappeared yet aga...Hey Chhaya, you seemed to have disappeared yet again :)<BR/><BR/>Waiting for your the next update...Rachanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01046400235118156847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-34141751848974502812009-02-20T18:21:00.000+05:302009-02-20T18:21:00.000+05:30don't ever try to make ur work a 3-D Picture. tryi...don't ever try to make ur work a 3-D Picture. trying to say too much ends up in explaining people what it really meant and that my dear friend is a waste. its worth is worth written...<BR/>great going...<BR/><BR/>A New BLOG NOVEL that deals with the search for "TRUE LOVE" in the DEV.D generation. <BR/>http://letstrylove.blogspot.com/CarelessChaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12259696331368214107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-17293585680240820742009-02-16T23:37:00.000+05:302009-02-16T23:37:00.000+05:30@Siladitya!obviously dude!!!@Siladitya!<BR/><BR/>obviously dude!!!Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-76121688734038519202009-02-16T23:29:00.000+05:302009-02-16T23:29:00.000+05:30is this written by u? BPO work from homeis this written by u?<BR/><A HREF="http://www.bpojobsathome.com" REL="nofollow"> BPO work from home </A>Siladitya Banerjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10168629508233583470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-14960010262141579722009-02-10T05:22:00.000+05:302009-02-10T05:22:00.000+05:30The fire within shows well. It surely is a poemThe fire within shows well. It surely is a poemJohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07774058959178034129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-87389061201406050112009-02-09T09:42:00.000+05:302009-02-09T09:42:00.000+05:30@Maya -trust me, i have tried writing "happy" poem...@Maya -<BR/>trust me, i have tried writing "happy" poems.. but i m really pathetic :D ... but promise to write something which is not completely pessimistic :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-61468578068670952482009-02-09T09:32:00.000+05:302009-02-09T09:32:00.000+05:30nice,liked the last 2 paras.i guess all your poems...nice,<BR/><BR/>liked the last 2 paras.<BR/><BR/>i guess all your poems are quiet negative, thou i like negativity but i think there should always be some kind of positivity in negativity. <BR/><BR/>anyway nice work<BR/><BR/>hoping to see a poem with a positive note next time.Mayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03259452145796716118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-70875412749789717092009-02-09T09:26:00.000+05:302009-02-09T09:26:00.000+05:30@Zero - Wild, it is :D .. your comment gave me the...@Zero - Wild, it is :D .. your comment gave me the title for the poem..Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-47888306157936778692009-02-09T09:25:00.000+05:302009-02-09T09:25:00.000+05:30@Venkat - i don’t know if they were really "toget...@Venkat - <BR/><BR/> i don’t know if they were really "together" or not. maybe it was also an illusion that ended rather painfully. This poem deal with that aspect of love, when the "idea" of being loved by someone special is so tempting that you don’t see that it never actually happened :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-67828341485101537832009-02-09T08:05:00.000+05:302009-02-09T08:05:00.000+05:30Interesting wild thoughts. We do come across emoti...Interesting wild thoughts. We do come across emotional storms some times in life. How ever a skill ful sailor is never made in smooth tides.<BR/>Lastly "Woh sikander hi dosto kehelata hai, haari baazi ko jeetna jise aata hai" What say? Best regards.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-83990573540945211802009-02-02T15:00:00.000+05:302009-02-02T15:00:00.000+05:30well I let it resonate in my head for a couple of ...well I let it resonate in my head for a couple of days. Still the last line "Nothing is forever" seems to suggest that it lasted for sometime. So are you suggesting that they were together however fleetingly?L. Venkata Subramaniamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08013877791567403788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-61135885490130007432009-01-31T23:51:00.000+05:302009-01-31T23:51:00.000+05:30Long time but worth the wait :)For some reason I h...Long time but worth the wait :)<BR/><BR/>For some reason I have been finding it difficult to access your blog, hope it is temporary.Rachanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01046400235118156847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-86579555274768007372009-01-30T15:21:00.000+05:302009-01-30T15:21:00.000+05:30@ Venkatathe whole compilation is about the broken...@ Venkata<BR/><BR/>the whole compilation is about the broken illusion. they were never meant for each other, but the realization came late. sometimes the myth of a perfect pair is too tempting and leads us to do stupid things, like thinking that we really know someone.... does it make sense now? :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-877742558488754430.post-20590012137478380482009-01-30T14:56:00.000+05:302009-01-30T14:56:00.000+05:30You come back after a writers block and claim this...You come back after a writers block and claim this is not a poem?<BR/><BR/>This looks like a poem to me :)<BR/><BR/>The ending "Nothing is forever Not even you and me"<BR/><BR/>doesnt seem to agree with the tone of the poem...they never seemed together in the first place?L. Venkata Subramaniamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08013877791567403788noreply@blogger.com