Faith
Saturday, May 9, 2009
Counting eternities
a moment a time,
waiting for the day
when you’ll be mine.
Searching for the moment
purest of all,
beauty of the night
sparkle of the dawn.
Warmth of your breaths
melting my soul
killing the demons
making me whole
I’ll live the dreams and
the stories untold.
Life will be perfect
I’ll be home.
© 2009 by Chhaya. All rights reserved
PS: the image is googled
a moment a time,
waiting for the day
when you’ll be mine.
Searching for the moment
purest of all,
beauty of the night
sparkle of the dawn.
Warmth of your breaths
melting my soul
killing the demons
making me whole
I’ll live the dreams and
the stories untold.
Life will be perfect
I’ll be home.
© 2009 by Chhaya. All rights reserved
PS: the image is googled
11 comments:
nice..
the final lines are best
"life will be perfect
i'll be home"
well, u asked me to check out ur new poem, i did so and a few older ones too. I must say, you are veryyyy talented!
The last line...... Life will be perfect and I'll be home...
Wow.. That was some poem...
:-)
@Maya, Vivek n "Whats in a Name" -
thank u :)
Nice little soulful poem, Chhaya!
Would certainly love to read your story too.
@Gopinathji..
this poem was rather special... i am glad u liked it. about the story.. i may start one soon..
:)
Same here Chhaya, love your blog too. Good to hear from you after all this while. Take care and keep writing and updating please :)
finally some hope! Very nice :)
@LVS -
was tougher than u can imagine :)
Beautiful! You've ended this piece very well! Keep writing!!!
Once again, excellent. The rhythmic pattern makes it sound happy. Yet it is one of the saddest of compositions I've read in a long time. And the contrast makes it a worthwhile experience to read the poem. Your poems have begun to shine now. I didn't understand the postscript though.
Deep Da
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