Farewell
Thursday, February 28, 2008
I carve out
my bleeding heart
it hurts bit more
as I laugh
pain
in your silence
burns me
in the rain
regret
in your eyes
cuts me deeper than
the deepest sea
fly away home
I set you free
as I pick up the pieces
of our dream
my bleeding heart
it hurts bit more
as I laugh
pain
in your silence
burns me
in the rain
regret
in your eyes
cuts me deeper than
the deepest sea
fly away home
I set you free
as I pick up the pieces
of our dream
© 2008 by Chhaya. All rights reserved
PS: the image is googled
5 comments:
Nice Blog.. Great Work..
Regards..
Aman..
your poems capture a strong sense of hurt, I think. and a longing to belong.
there must be many a good story tied to what you write. something like that. this is my first impression.
This is immensely sad! Burns in the rain just amplifies the pain here. Ah! very well expressed!
This is one of your finest pieces! Keep writing!!!
PS: Pardon me, but I must add that I love your name very much. I recall you mentioning that it translates to shadow, right? Nice!!!
@Brosreview - glad to know that u like my name Ajey.. yes, it does mean "The shadow" .. May be this is the source of all the shades of black in my poems :)
sirf ek baat hi bolunga is poem ke liye wo..
"pain
in your silence
burns me
in the rain"
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