Beyond the Sunset
Sunday, September 14, 2008
Sitting by the ocean
of love and life.
Dipping my toes
scared of the tide.
Caressed by your voice
ever so gentle.
Setting me free
pulling me deeper.
Wild waves taunt
my lowered eyes.
And I think of that someone
who has your love tonight.
Holding you close
away from the world.
Through days of joy
and nights of laughter.
I wait forever
in smiles and tears .
Silent, helpless words,
but the heartbeat whispers
Your soul tells me
untamed as the sea.
beyond the sunset,
that someone is me.
© 2008 by Chhaya. All rights reserved
PS: the image is googled
of love and life.
Dipping my toes
scared of the tide.
Caressed by your voice
ever so gentle.
Setting me free
pulling me deeper.
Wild waves taunt
my lowered eyes.
And I think of that someone
who has your love tonight.
Holding you close
away from the world.
Through days of joy
and nights of laughter.
I wait forever
in smiles and tears .
Silent, helpless words,
but the heartbeat whispers
Your soul tells me
untamed as the sea.
beyond the sunset,
that someone is me.
© 2008 by Chhaya. All rights reserved
PS: the image is googled
12 comments:
i like this poem a lot... the end is what connects everything...
thanx 4 visiting my blog & commenting... but how did u find my blog?! i do appreciate it~
ur writing is full of emotion based on relationship(s)... keep writing!
Nice, especially the last four lines. It seems so much easier to follow your heart than to think and rethink issues sometimes.
I guess it's a double treat coming from you in a short span :)
Honestly, I liked the unpolished one more, the one where you followed your heart :) But then it is just a feeling.
Please continue to create as it is a real pleasure to read and feel what you write.
You too have a great and a creative Sunday!
Yep, I think I do.
thank u 4 reading... & commenting... it means much 4 me when some1 values my writing...
i dont think it was just chance that u found my blog! i think that it was meant to be... gald to "meet u" from the US haha
feel free 2 contact me thru email:
pfa.is.ksao@gmail.com
btw, im sorry 2 hear about what happened in ur country
Beautiful poetry. I love the way it leads you to think of unrequited love before you get to the ending which then turns your thoughts upside down.
Sharon (http://cardsngreetings.blogspot.com/)
Hey,
It is sooo nice..
Especially that someone's me line at the end..
:-)
Heard of this song by enrique?
Somebody wants you!!
Somebody needs you!!
Somebody dreams about you every single night!!!
That somebodys me...
Excellent words..
Dont have words to praise u C !!! Ferrari is such a beauty to just praise with no ends !!!
Hey,
Am blogrolling you.. :-)
And your Hisstory PJ has been posted on my blog as well...:-)
hey....something different!!! Thank heavens d pain is finally disappearing....
guess the prayers r working....
reading thru it, i felt u wudn change, d end brought a smile though!!!
cool re....loved it...HATS OFF TO MY FAV POETESS.....
tc...
Regards,
A Pilgrim...
Umm, to me, this is a beautiful elaboration of the phrase - "made for each other" OR "soul mates".
I love the tenderness and beauty in this one. It is so fragile and lovely! Keep them coming Chhaya!
@Brosreview - I find it really tough to write happy poems.. i dont know why.. this is among the very few that i have written..
thnx for the kind word Ajey :)
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