Saturday, May 9, 2009

Counting eternities
a moment a time,
waiting for the day
when you’ll be mine.
Searching for the moment
purest of all,
beauty of the night
sparkle of the dawn.

Warmth of your breaths
melting my soul
killing the demons
making me whole
I’ll live the dreams and
the stories untold.
Life will be perfect
I’ll be home.

© 2009 by Chhaya. All rights reserved
PS: the image is googled


Maya May 10, 2009 at 8:24 AM  


the final lines are best
"life will be perfect
i'll be home"

vvk May 11, 2009 at 4:32 PM  

well, u asked me to check out ur new poem, i did so and a few older ones too. I must say, you are veryyyy talented!

Whats In A Name May 11, 2009 at 6:21 PM  

The last line...... Life will be perfect and I'll be home...

Wow.. That was some poem...

Chhaya May 11, 2009 at 7:28 PM  

@Maya, Vivek n "Whats in a Name" -

thank u :)

Gopinath Mavinkurve May 11, 2009 at 8:31 PM  

Nice little soulful poem, Chhaya!
Would certainly love to read your story too.

Chhaya May 11, 2009 at 10:16 PM  

this poem was rather special... i am glad u liked it. about the story.. i may start one soon..

Rachana May 12, 2009 at 4:52 AM  

Same here Chhaya, love your blog too. Good to hear from you after all this while. Take care and keep writing and updating please :)

L. Venkata Subramaniam May 12, 2009 at 4:52 PM  

finally some hope! Very nice :)

Chhaya May 12, 2009 at 4:56 PM  

@LVS -
was tougher than u can imagine :)

Opaque June 26, 2009 at 12:52 PM  

Beautiful! You've ended this piece very well! Keep writing!!!

D.Dasgupta July 23, 2009 at 8:40 AM  

Once again, excellent. The rhythmic pattern makes it sound happy. Yet it is one of the saddest of compositions I've read in a long time. And the contrast makes it a worthwhile experience to read the poem. Your poems have begun to shine now. I didn't understand the postscript though.

Deep Da

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