Of Love and Shadows

Friday, May 30, 2008

Do you feel me beside you,
as the night surrounds us?
Can you feel me hold you close,
caressing, kissing your brow?
In your eyes, questions infinite,
Wanting me to concede.
Lips sewn, bloody
rusty chains, I have on my feet

The morning will come
The chill will be gone
But will you ever know,
that my heart was torn?
I let you pass by, looking
at me with eyes accusing
for hurting you every moment,
with my dead, silent spirit.

You call me heartless
I keep the vow of silence.
You walk in the sunshine,
renouncing the darkness and me
I hear your anger
cursing the eternity.
You call me coward
and turn away from me

But know this my love
even if I’m gone
my love will be with you,
keeping you warm.
And when the time triumphs
leaving marks on your face,
when the sun sets, in the darkness
you will find me once more.



Anonymous,  June 13, 2008 at 9:39 AM  

Hi, chhaya your poems are very nice & you express yourself quite well. I also like to compose poems but i don't know the way to express them.

musafir July 5, 2008 at 4:57 PM  

Sensitive poetry.
Read your story Forever on blogs.4indianwoman.com and liked it. Good luck for the future.

Anonymous,  July 18, 2008 at 3:58 PM  

Good collection of Poem CHHAYA....all the best...tc

Rachana September 12, 2008 at 10:39 AM  

Hey chhaya, thanks for the advice, I will keep your suggestion as a option and see how it works out. BTW waiting for you next update.

Anonymous,  June 23, 2009 at 4:45 PM  

mujhe ye poem thodi heavy lagi.. (i cant describe the weight of d emotion and feeling)

Opaque July 2, 2009 at 5:23 PM  

This is fine. Umm, I mean, I detect the emotional feel in this one. But, sadly, I have read enough of such stuff and so I'm tempted to call it clichéd in a few places. Having written that, I don't imply it is bad. However, you can try polishing this. No offence.

Also, when you are free, spare some time to read my album MEMORIES COME ALIVE. Again, this one too is quite clichéd. However, you'll notice, as you read it, that the style is still slightly different making it stand out from the rest.

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